Comment Analysis

To make improvements for my cover page I am going to re-take some of my images so that I have a wider range of artists and I can then also change the outfit so the text can become more visible. My cover model is a member of the band ‘HUMAN’ therefore I need to take more images so that I can make ‘Ellie G’ as a separate person and also to make it clearer that the cover model is not 'Ellie G'.