tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3384463838737353684.post8913472088484615012..comments2015-04-13T12:10:14.527-07:00Comments on Mel's AS Media-Magazine Blog: Evaluation Question 1 DraftAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15973374522725618186noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3384463838737353684.post-19049367415953517242015-03-22T05:06:28.508-07:002015-03-22T05:06:28.508-07:00You first paragraph doesn't directly answer th...<br />You first paragraph doesn't directly answer the question, it reads more as an explanation of your magazine rather than an evaluation of how you used, developed or challenged conventions. Only briefly do you mention a similarity with Cosmo, you MUST continually connect your magazine to existing texts and explain the inspiration you have taken.<br /><br />You must be much more specific, in paragraph two you simply state your work is similar to many magazines without specifying which ones. Again in this paragraph you do not actually answer the question, remember each question is designed to assess a specific skill set so you must focus on what the question is asking.<br /><br />Paragraph 3 is slightly better as you focus on how you've challenged conventions from Bliss.<br /><br />Targets<br /><br />Use vocabulary from the question in your response<br />Always provide specific examples<br />Look at the example responses on Mr Ford's blogMr Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12759789197085658607noreply@blogger.com